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Lonely Soul Naked

lonely soul naked i stand at the end of earth eyes see the brown sky raining dead pale yellowed birds on the dead sea salt frozen Simply This: Top Ten Tanka - Poetry Contest Sponsor Andrea Dietrich 8th March, 2015

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Date: 3/8/2015 3:11:00 PM
Emotional desolation. Very well written, Rajat! Wishing you good luck in the contest. This is a winner. Hugs, Kimberly xx
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/9/2015 12:04:00 PM
I have shown How earth may end someday...dead pale earth..a poet hears sound of her last breath....it's a bleak picture I have painted Kimberly. Love. God bless>>>rajat
Date: 3/8/2015 12:38:00 AM
Great visuals
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/8/2015 3:02:00 AM
Love njeri >god bless>rajat

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