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Lonely Loon

lonely loon on lake Looking calling for his mate Moon beams crying too Just learned about syllables in Haiku. Updated

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Date: 2/21/2018 10:10:00 PM
Very nice! :)
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 2/22/2018 9:08:00 AM
Thanks my friend
Date: 2/7/2018 12:54:00 PM
Hello Carlo, as i read this Haiku, i can see the lonely loon. Have a nice day my friend.
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 2/7/2018 6:25:00 PM
Thank you Darlene.
Date: 2/6/2018 10:40:00 PM
Lovely subject! <3 Kim
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 2/7/2018 9:39:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 2/6/2018 8:53:00 PM
beautiful...I reckon that lake must be getting crowded. :)
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 2/6/2018 9:45:00 PM
Thank you.

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