Get Your Premium Membership

Lonely Lamp Post

She was a lamp post The moths were drawn to her light A phenomenon really But the moths did not contribute, they just stole from her For they didn't know any better They only knew how to survive She wanted to turn it off, But it forever stayed on Not a single moth ever stuck around very long Just long enough to draw from the light Then they'd fly away And she was just a lonely lamp post Always standing tall and strong Giving all of her light and receiving nothing in return

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/29/2015 8:32:00 PM
Andra, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2015 1:52:00 PM
Andra, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2015 4:39:00 AM
- Hey Andra :) - Welcome with your first great poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/28/2015 11:42:00 PM
What a lovely, poignant little piece, Andra- enjoyed it very much. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope that you enjoy your time with us, and I'm sure you will find the site entertaining, informative, happy, sad, thoughtful, and a hugely comprehensive resource that will help you and your work blossom. Have fun. Regards, Viv
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things