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Lonely Kite

I used to be a lonely kite, bound to extended fields. Till when, a plait of your hair was hung to my ear. Restless, I got, longing for you. Now, after long long journeys whenever flying down, I smell of the seas. Elham Askari

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Skat A

Date: 4/19/2016 11:41:00 PM

Elham Askari, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Elham Askari
Date: 10/27/2016 11:24:00 AM

Hello Skat, Thanks a great deal for the very kind message. This is the second time I'm visiting the site and I got really delight to see your message here. I will send more of my poems here and I will be more than happy to read your comments on them. Love Elham

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/18/2016 12:02:00 AM

H Elham, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs

Elham Askari
Date: 10/27/2016 11:29:00 AM

Hi Manmath, Thank you very much for the nice greeting. Cheers Elham

Moon Flower

Date: 4/17/2016 10:35:00 AM

Great first entry you have here, Elham. Welcome to Poetry Soup. :)

Elham Askari
Date: 10/27/2016 11:29:00 AM

Thanks for being so kind.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/17/2016 7:32:00 AM

Elham,,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Elham Askari
Date: 10/27/2016 11:56:00 AM

Hi dear Linda, Thank you so much for the very nice and kind message, suggestions and instructions. It is my second time visiting the site. I try my best to visit more often and will definitely read your poems and ask for guidance. Cheers Elham