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Lonely Day

Smile for me, lonely girl, smile and put your fears aside. Sit with me on this lonely old bench; watch as the birds frolic and play. And cry on me, my dear love, let your pain pour out anew- this game of love has rolled to an end, and the only loser is you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/29/2014 11:30:00 PM
Joseph,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 11/29/2014 6:29:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Joseph - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/26/2014 9:58:00 AM
Well written. Keep writing. If you click on a name or avatar, then it will take you to their works. If you then leave a comment... Then they will have a permanent link back to your works.
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Date: 11/24/2014 11:58:00 AM
Very nice piece you've penned here, Joseph. Have a great day! ;) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 11/24/2014 11:50:00 AM
Really enjoyed this piece, very well written Joseph. Best Wishes Kevin
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