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Lonely Bird

It’s time now to leave my lovely, lonely bird Bravely soar, your sad songs should be heard Born in the hail of a horrific hurricane Harboring hallowed cries of hidden pain Shear feathers shimmer, glimmering so soft Embracing grace as you gently glide aloft Your song as you soar becomes spirited and sweet Divine, not weak or deafened with barbed defeat Swiftness swells as you spread your strong wings Time now to travel and embrace foreign things Mesmerized with water’s mirrored reflection Your shimmering image greets you with affection Flying freely, your heartbeat grows fierce Realizing the reality your spirit’s not pierced Tiny winged warrior wakens deep depths of fire Knowing now nothing can quell your desire You, little bird, are stronger than you know Surviving the storm somehow made you grow Fear is not frightening for friend is the unknown You know by yourself now you’ll never be alone. ________________________________________ March 30, 2018 Poetry Contest: Alliteration Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 9/11/2018 8:39:00 AM
Enjoyed the creative use of Alliteration. Sara
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Date: 5/8/2018 4:24:00 PM
I'm so late, to read this wonderful poem, love alliteration, and you write it so well..
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Date: 4/11/2018 8:44:00 AM
Skillfully rendered, I believe this will do well. I enjoyed stopping by this morning.
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Date: 4/10/2018 5:59:00 PM
I see this won in the alliteration contest, Judith. Both inspiring as it is lyrical.
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Date: 4/9/2018 9:19:00 AM
This is so beautiful, Judith! I'm glad to see it won in the contest!
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Date: 4/6/2018 7:36:00 AM
Congratulation on your win Judy. This is such a beautiful emotive piece. I enjoyed reading it this early morning... Hugs :)
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Date: 4/3/2018 9:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Judith, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/3/2018 9:25:00 PM
Wonderfully executed my friend...SO should have placed this first...great song choice too...truly magnificent...stay in the light...^WW^
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Date: 4/3/2018 5:15:00 PM
What a stunning alliterative poem you so skillfully penned, Judith! I enjoyed it immensely! Congrats on your top win, well deserved! :)
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Date: 4/3/2018 3:01:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Judith. Love the message of strength. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/3/2018 10:13:00 AM
You did pretty good here. Congrats.
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Date: 4/2/2018 9:27:00 PM
Delightful metaphors, Judith ... along with lovely alliteration ... Well deserved top notch win ... Congratulations ...
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Date: 4/2/2018 4:39:00 PM
Very well done Judith, i found myself questioning if there was alliteration in this poem at times only to be amazed at how smoothly it flowed and blended into its rhythmic cadence.
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Date: 4/2/2018 4:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Judith. The little bird claimed from the strength of challenges. I like your poem, Kai
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Date: 4/2/2018 2:12:00 AM
A wonderful write Judy, nothing more that I can add that hasn't been expressed already, except that it is exquisite, and i see congratulations are in order on your top win. So well deserved my dear friend....Maria xx
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Date: 4/1/2018 6:34:00 PM
Many congrat's your top notch win, Judith. A powerful life lesson...especially in the last verse.
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Date: 4/1/2018 5:45:00 PM
Returning with congratulations, Judy, for your excellent first place win with your beautifully expressive poem.. warmest wishes my NE friend..
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Date: 4/1/2018 5:42:00 PM
The flight, the strength of a bird! Lovely! Congrats!
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Date: 4/1/2018 3:29:00 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 2:42:00 PM
That is one sad bird, this poem is deeply emotive and I could feel the angst in this one.. Your alliteration and rhyme helped with the flow of this poem.. I hope that bird finds its strength.. Great take on the contest.. Congratulations on your first place
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Date: 4/2/2018 8:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Silent One!!! You completely honor me, my dear friend, with this placement amongst such amazing poets!!!!
Date: 3/30/2018 7:55:00 PM
Wow! Judy, metaphorically beautiful, your poem soars on poetic lines of lovely alliteration and shines in its heartfelt message of embracing strength gained through adversity. Your last two lines are amazing. A tender and elegant write my NE friend. Warmest wishes and best wishes for a win. ~Susan
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Date: 3/30/2018 10:27:00 AM
Wonderful metaphor, Judith. Good luck in contest!
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Judith S
Date: 4/7/2018 7:02:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind words Daniel! ~Judy
Date: 3/30/2018 8:56:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your story of the bird..I read it as a strong metaphor for life..a message of strength, freedom, and courage..a top win in my books, Judy!
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Judith S
Date: 4/7/2018 7:01:00 PM
Dear Vijay ... thank you so much kind man for your constant support and inspiration!! ~Judy
Date: 3/30/2018 8:39:00 AM
Such an endearing write, Judy. Sometimes we are all lonely little birds I love your message XXXOOO
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Judith S
Date: 4/7/2018 7:00:00 PM
THANK you Mike!!! :) ~Judy
Date: 3/30/2018 7:37:00 AM
I read you clear as daylight...A wonderful write...brings out the spirit of the poem...All the best Judith...
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Judith S
Date: 4/7/2018 7:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Arturo for your constant support and kind words ;) ~Judy

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