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Lonely

Sometimes I love the lonely. This solitary feeling. The internal longing. Waiting for her. My heart's anticipation. I feel the emptiness and quiet of our room. I wonder, is she thinking of me? Feeling lonely as well? Am I far from her mind? Wait this isn't so great, the walls are closing in. I feel my heart beginning to ache. Ring! Ring! "I miss you Sweetie" she makes me smile a happy lonely smile.

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Heather Ober

Date: 9/17/2013 10:56:00 AM

This is very sweet, Rick! You capture feelings of yearning and longing so very well. Love is so bittersweet, n'est-ce pas?

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/24/2013 7:57:00 AM

Thanks Heather.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/17/2013 6:49:00 AM

I could not see you as lonely Richard, but your poetry truly makes it real....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2013 6:54:00 AM

I have my moments. Thanks Harry this is a very nice comment.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/16/2013 9:02:00 PM

EXCELLENTLY PENNED PIECE

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2013 6:37:00 AM

Thanks Liam

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2013 7:10:00 PM

this one is adorable. I really LIKES it. Hope Susan does too!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2013 6:37:00 AM

Ha ha, I hope she does as well.

Robert Johnson

Date: 9/16/2013 6:54:00 PM

A happy lonely smile. Speaks to the reality of life. So nice to be saved by the bell. Peace. :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2013 6:38:00 AM

Thanks Robert

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 9/16/2013 4:38:00 PM

This is a simple sweet Poe Rick :) loved how it ends :) all well in here and enjoyed to read this sweet treat in my very morning :D I wish you also have a great day there :Dhug, Yanny

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/16/2013 4:39:00 PM

Thanks Yanny! Hugs Rick. :0)

Constance La France

Date: 9/16/2013 1:13:00 PM

Rick, beautifully written poem, well done and thank you so much for my placement in your Pick a Line, Any Line Contest, I am very honoured, Constance

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/16/2013 1:23:00 PM

My pleasure Constance.