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Loneliness Is My Friend

Loneliness is my friend talks with me in silence lovely darling no one sees She loves to be with me never expresses anything sees what I do feel only She helps me a lot never lodge any complain to make me hot but she gets disturbed when I talk She opens her unseen veins through which calmness she pours smiles when I find wisdom

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2013 11:19:00 PM

very transcendental type poetry. I think you did really well, especially with the first two stanzas.

Len Gasun

Date: 9/24/2013 10:54:00 AM

Wow! This is a brilliant idea and awesome poem about loneliness my dear friend bl. You did it very well. I like it and a winner for sure. Thank you so much for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Thank you so much as well for your precious time to visit and leave lovely comments on my poem. Have a great day! More blessings and power! love lots, Leonora

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/24/2013 12:07:00 PM

A lot of thanks to you for your nice visit and for boosting up comment on my write. Loved always, bl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/24/2013 5:22:00 AM

Wonderful inner feelings penned well. Loneliness brings peace and silence, it depends upon one which to choose, devnath

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/24/2013 9:28:00 AM

Many thanks Dr. for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 9/24/2013 12:33:00 AM

Whoa Bl, this is fantastic and I must say you've managed to make loneliness sound attractive - in a good way. Very well done. ps, I wanted to ask whether you are on QuoteSoup, as I was reading some of the quotes I thought of your stunning proverbs and sayings.

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/24/2013 9:27:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your lovely comment. Yes, I have written one quote there, perhaps. Thanks a lot for reading my quote. Loved always,bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2013 4:17:00 PM

Loneliness is a great teacher..Enjoyed reading your creative work today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/23/2013 11:39:00 PM

Many thanks my sweet friend. Loved always, bl