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Loneliness

LONELINESS muted sound of TV creeping through emaciated walls thoughts reflecting drift distancing solitudes seclusion choosing to fade the day away in reclusive isolation I contemplate our separate lives your wrecking ball in rage survives bury all love in faded world-weary worn- out dreams ambiguously vague swallowing alcohol doubt exhumes diamonds in the dirt of neat rows I contemplate our separate lives your wrecking ball in rage survives slowly buried under all these words and lines hiding and healing hollow void empty spaces muted voice of numbed emotion emaciated falls I contemplate our separate lives your wrecking ball in rage survive © Kim van Breda—5 August 2014

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Date: 9/21/2014 8:14:00 PM
this an excellent piece of writing i tip my hat
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Date: 8/14/2014 9:47:00 PM
Great write Kim....I love the diamonds line...best wishes
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Date: 8/13/2014 11:39:00 AM
Very powerful Kim...I hope if this true that everything works out..very emotive....hugs Tim
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