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Loneliness

There is only a chair in this empty space There is no-one in it, It is barren and bare. I am alone. Should i sit Will someone come if I sit. I sit. No-one comes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/13/2014 12:16:00 AM
Judy,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/9/2014 11:50:00 AM
Ahhh... We end the lonliness by going out and sharing... Well written. Welcome to PoetrySoup. If you click on a name or avatar... You will be taken to their poetry. If you leave a comment, then they will have a permanent link back to your poetry.
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Date: 8/9/2014 7:21:00 AM
Short and sweet, but sums up the loneliness, Judy
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Date: 8/8/2014 9:22:00 PM
Nice. I know what loneliness is like and it is close to the way you wrote about loneliness.
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Date: 8/8/2014 3:24:00 PM
Nice write.. Better get another chair so that someone will come and sit beside u. ^^
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Date: 8/8/2014 3:16:00 PM
I will come and join you then you won't be lonely - great write - good luck if its for the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 8/8/2014 2:50:00 PM
I will come sit with you as well....Have a wonderful weekend...you are not alone....hugs Tim
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Judy Wood
Date: 8/8/2014 3:09:00 PM
Thanks Tim. Have a good weekend too.
Date: 8/8/2014 2:46:00 PM
may i sit with you, my friend?.. hope you got my soupie... endearing write!.. huggs
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Judy Wood
Date: 8/8/2014 3:10:00 PM
Thanks. You may sit with me.
Date: 8/8/2014 2:37:00 PM
I love this poem, it's beautiful and sad at the same time.very meaningful.
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Judy Wood
Date: 8/8/2014 3:10:00 PM
Thanks. Glad you like it.

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