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Loneliness

glassy-eyed people moving as in a dream looking without seeing seeing without looking utter hopelessness pervading their insides filling them with despair and pessimism lustreless eyes no inner joy just a deep emptiness stifling their souls dried-up people shutting others out shutting themselves in lost in their loneliness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/11/2013 3:19:00 PM
Oh, oh how sad , but so true too. and the poem leaves not even a little bit of hope.
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Date: 10/23/2013 8:18:00 PM
John, awesome deep win.. LOVE -- SKAT
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John Beharry
Date: 12/4/2013 5:14:00 PM
Thank you, Skat. Best wishes! Have a wonderful day!
Date: 10/22/2013 10:20:00 PM
love the win John...PD
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John Beharry
Date: 12/4/2013 5:15:00 PM
Thank you, PD. Have a great day!
Date: 10/21/2013 11:13:00 AM
Congrats on your winning placement, John! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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John Beharry
Date: 12/4/2013 5:16:00 PM
Thank you, Rhonda. Have a charming day!
Date: 10/21/2013 8:19:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, John
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John Beharry
Date: 12/4/2013 5:17:00 PM
Thank you, Dr Mehta. Have a pleasant day!
Date: 10/20/2013 6:57:00 PM
nicely penned...congrats on your win :)
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John Beharry
Date: 12/4/2013 5:19:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Have a nice day!
Date: 10/18/2013 7:04:00 PM
Well said....congratulations on your winning poem....
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John Beharry
Date: 12/4/2013 5:13:00 PM
Thank you, Donna. Have a delightful day!
Date: 10/16/2013 5:45:00 PM
uh uh i simply dont know what to say my friend what an exclusive and powerful peace you have created here.Grate work
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John Beharry
Date: 10/16/2013 10:21:00 PM
Thank you for your comment, Michael. Best Regards!

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