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Loneliness

This state I could no longer bear, For long, life has not been so fair , Left alone with no one to care, This I despair, this I despair. I dream of living without pain, death has made this to be in vain, Loneliness runs in me like train, I`m not insane,I`m not insane. CONTEST:"Monotetra" sponsored by Kim Merryman

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Date: 7/21/2013 1:43:00 AM
Great poem Olusequn - really enjoyed the flow and the emotion of the words...Shaz
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Date: 7/11/2013 6:41:00 PM
You highlighted these emotions very well...Loneliness, pain and despair that could easily drive one to the brink of insanity. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 7/11/2013 9:33:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win. AO
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Date: 7/10/2013 5:36:00 PM
Nicely done, my friend... This one deserved its win.... Jake
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Date: 7/9/2013 9:42:00 PM
olusegun, Congrats In Kim's "Monotetra" contest....take care...LINDA
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Date: 7/9/2013 8:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your mono. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/9/2013 12:00:00 PM
Olusegon, such a sad write. Good job with the form. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/9/2013 11:27:00 AM
You really got the point across that sometimes life feels too much to bear!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/28/2013 8:20:00 PM
Sad poem..I enjoyed the read but wished I could give you a hug. BG
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Date: 6/28/2013 7:23:00 PM
you did well with the form. A sad poem!
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Date: 6/28/2013 7:23:00 PM
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Date: 6/28/2013 6:58:00 PM
I really like this. Good luck in the contest.
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