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Loneliness

I feel so mellow,when i should feel so hollow,Cant stop wondering about tomorrow....will i wake wit a smile,wake with brand new oppotunities for me to undertake with full force....wondering if i could borrow...that incessant smile...knowing it will allway's be on your face even when life throws you arrows and stone's...i wish i had the skill to make from all these arrows and stones,A fortress....to fight my battles with courage....am on a lonely road and i commuter only for my love's ride's home...to a place were i belong...never forget me my love,As i wait for your ride from this loneliness...

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Date: 5/9/2013 9:35:00 PM
wow~ SKAT
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Date: 5/7/2013 2:04:00 PM
Powerful piece. Enjoyed reading your poem.
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Chate Dante
Date: 5/8/2013 1:03:00 PM
thank you brother...
Date: 5/7/2013 6:55:00 AM
thank you....david
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Date: 5/7/2013 6:38:00 AM
Welcome Chate! You poem is full of movement and expectation, and I like it. David
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