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Lone Yellow Flower

lone yellow flower waves in the open fields bowing according to the tune among the sea of green; lone yellow flower has no one to blame and it seeks none to praise for it knows all life comes in when the conditions are right; lone yellow flower knows death comes in like the wind; lone yellow flower is never alone for it is a part of the expression of the earth and time and the universe; lone yellow flower sees what is before and around lone yellow flower observes what is within and about and so lone yellow flower lives with no delusions no beliefs of heaven and hell fears none and does not live or die to please or amuse or appease; and lone yellow flower blossoms and shines and shrivels and ceases in harmony with what actually is; lone yellow flower waves in the open fields bowing according to the tune among the sea of green

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Date: 6/3/2010 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Fred. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2010 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 4/12/2010 12:10:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/12/2010 12:00:00 PM
Two thumbs up my friend. Wish you more success. Ernilando
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Date: 4/12/2010 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Fred. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2010 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations Fred, on placing 2nd in The Rambling Poet’s “Wild Flowers” Mini-Poetry contest with these creative words. Your poem is enjoyable to read. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/29/2010 10:13:00 PM
good view and a great write yet one awaits
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Date: 1/29/2010 8:35:00 PM
Good use of imagery and an interesting perspective. Congratulations on your second place finish in Constance's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/29/2010 7:38:00 PM
Consider them. . . (like the lilies of the fields) This is just awesome and congratulations for your win in that very short contest!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/29/2010 4:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your second place. I really love the vibration the poem create.
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Date: 1/29/2010 4:04:00 PM
Many wishes with your other poem
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Date: 1/29/2010 2:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your second place win Fred. Your poem vibrates in beauty as does your philosophy. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 1/29/2010 12:24:00 PM
congratulations Fred! Robert
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Date: 1/29/2010 11:41:00 AM
Very nice your poem on the flower with no name. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/29/2010 10:41:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Fred. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/29/2010 9:49:00 AM
A well deserved win for you, Fred! Great poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/29/2010 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place win, in my contest, Wildflowers, with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 1/29/2010 7:04:00 AM
beautiful picture you paint, I can see it so well!!
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Date: 1/29/2010 6:41:00 AM
Sounds like a lonely life out there in that field all by itself. Welcome to soup. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/29/2010 4:09:00 AM
well i can picture the lone yellow flower among the sea of green. A great poem it is enjoyed~~
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Date: 1/29/2010 1:22:00 AM
I like the "lone yellow flower's perspective on the world around her and her place in the universe. Nice work, Danny. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/29/2010 12:46:00 AM
You have captured some interesting emoyions here I do not Know wether to be sad for the lonely flower or pleased for it's care Free nature - interesting and nicely put together
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