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Lone Snowflake

Geometric flake comes down from the sky Hexagon center, six lines don’t deny Extended arms going outwards from there Small pieces going beyond without fear I grab this lone snowflake for its safety Though it was so pristine, then I did see This very flake has melted to water Due to the heat of my hand that’s hotter I become saddened that this has happened I loved seeing this masterpiece pattern I weep for the short life of this cool flake I hope to see its brothers, for my sake Just then I looked around, guess what I saw Millions of snowflakes falling, I’m in awe Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/13/2014 10:06:00 AM
Loved the title... It drew me in... Enjoyed the poem, too.
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Date: 1/12/2014 4:29:00 PM
love this beautiful write, Russell
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Date: 1/12/2014 3:36:00 PM
full of excellent images and metaphors as well as depth and meaning, russell... enjoyed the soft feel of a snowflake; lovely in every way!.. thaks for your birthday greetings!.. huggs
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Date: 1/11/2014 4:22:00 PM
Beautiful.. Well written. Keep on writing and well done for being among the top 100 most active poets.
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Date: 1/11/2014 3:57:00 PM
What a positive message towards the end..I love the concept re snowflakes..You left.me.in awe.Happy.weekend!!!: )
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Date: 1/11/2014 3:33:00 PM
Wow!! Glad that you are blessed with snowflakes or maybe that is not a blessing from what I am hearing on the news.We have got sun now with a very blue sky and 65 degrees after dark clouds, pouring rain, wind, thunder and lighting this morning..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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