Lone Hearts

No wish to speak I'd rather hear what you think and feel. Yet I must reveal something of my own before you feel free to share your song. ...Then the flood gate opens ...And I can only listen The pain you've kept hidden could no longer be contained as you tried giving me a hand, to soothe my own, you let rain your own... Now we understand Now we become as one As if we belong to the same family ... and we are ... ... we all are... No longer Lone Hearts. © CarolineCecile - 07.22.12

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/3/2016 1:11:00 AM

I enjoyed reading, and was just being poetic in saying more would be great and that I liked your works! :)

Caroline Cécile Delacroix
Date: 4/3/2016 1:30:00 AM

Thanks very much. What surprised me that this is an older poem, not one of the two I posted today at least so far..

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/2/2016 11:55:00 PM

A poet with such flair, should dare, to write a new verse in 2016, for a breath of fresh air.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix
Date: 4/3/2016 1:06:00 AM

sorry, I have not been posting here for a very long time, but my writing has never cease. I have been asked to review a couple of poets' work here, so I decided to post some recent work. Thanks for the compliment.

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/31/2012 11:45:00 AM

Beautifully written piece. Beautiful sentiments, too. A rare thing to happen.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix
Date: 4/3/2016 1:08:00 AM

Sorry, I have been absent from this website for a long time, but thank you Carol for your comments.