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A shear with in arrogant move,
Pulls up her rear to disapprove,
Turns to blush pinks within the hush,
Mouth ovate in the soft subdued crush;

Black lines expose her twisted spurs,
Fingers play with the bottom lures,
Incredulous walks the ramp edge,
I let off a catcall to fledge;

Poor soul carries her bag in hops,
Catch her to disarms as she drops,
Heaven and hell before the fall,
A swift soft kiss rumples the doll;

Obscure or white the stretch is fine,
Stay on track each path looks divine?

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  1. Date: 4/9/2010 8:49:00 AM
    This reads like a very intriguing sonnet, Jai. I was drawn in by the compelling images and like the message conveyed in the last line. Nice work! Love, Carolyn