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A shear with in arrogant move, Pulls up her rear to disapprove, Turns to blush pinks within the hush, Mouth ovate in the soft subdued crush; Black lines expose her twisted spurs, Fingers play with the bottom lures, Incredulous walks the ramp edge, I let off a catcall to fledge; Poor soul carries her bag in hops, Catch her to disarms as she drops, Heaven and hell before the fall, A swift soft kiss rumples the doll; Obscure or white the stretch is fine, Stay on track each path looks divine?

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Date: 4/9/2010 8:49:00 AM
This reads like a very intriguing sonnet, Jai. I was drawn in by the compelling images and like the message conveyed in the last line. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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