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Locked Away

This is a sad tale of Amanda Knox, still but a child in bobby socks who enrolled in an Italian school, far away from her parents' rule. Her folks say she was a gentle child. Perhaps she went a little wild when by lover she was beguiled. By a heinous crime she was defiled. Sloppy police work, ambitious attorney, poor Amanda had started on a journey that would find her convicted of a murder. She declared her innocence. No one heard her. Her folks have gone to immense expense to hire lawyers for her defense. Despite their efforts for two long years she's been locked away beyond their tears. Amanda has grown so thin and gaunt, locked up with criminals who taunt and seem to think it their sacred duty to make life grim for this young beauty. For Miranda's "Behind Bars Blues" contest won 6th

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Date: 6/21/2011 11:10:00 AM
Many congratulations Joyce on your win in Miranda's contest with this fine poem. Regarding the trial and arrest of Amanda Knox relating to the incident in Italy. Something just doesn't seem right, my interpretation :)
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Date: 6/21/2011 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Randa's "Behind Bars Blues" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2011 11:08:00 AM
So happy to see your ranking high, Joyce. This poem was very moving. As for mine, I'm fine with my placement. I was just trying to shed light on a problem and it probably seemed to "educational." Date today! Can't wait. MRI results Monday or Tuesday. Congratulations and love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/18/2011 10:19:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on another amazing win in the contest with this superior write my friend..enjoy iuv..
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Date: 6/18/2011 10:14:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of miranda, Joyce
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Date: 5/27/2011 7:09:00 PM
This is a crazy story...one I wish were not true. Nice depiction. By the way, beguiled just may be one of my favorite words. I'm glad I read this. You are a soup pioneer! ~JSLambertyj
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Date: 5/27/2011 1:20:00 PM
Joyce this is a terrible thing to happen for someone so young, and to be in there with those people must really be hell for that poor child. I hope they can get some good news soon. this was a great write you out did your self on this one.
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Date: 5/27/2011 10:40:00 AM
Great Joyce!your solemnous rhyme terribly enchants here. A dexterous bake!-flavourfully intriguing.Fare you gloriously in the contest.
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Date: 5/26/2011 4:18:00 PM
it is so bad when a crime is committed over in another country Joyce and Italy is super tough and not flexible at all... running with the wrong people has landed her in this mess..so sad..but your poem depicts all facets of this murderous tale almost like a beauty and the beast story.. good luck in the contest as this is a rare beauty..luv.. hope u enjoy a happy and safe holiday weekend..
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Date: 5/26/2011 12:05:00 PM
this was awesome great job! cory
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:45:00 AM
How sad ,Is this true Joyce? You wrote a profound poem on this very sad subject.Anne
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:18:00 AM
Dear Joyce! This is a beautiful narrative stylishly describing a pitiable event. An elegant write. Thanks for you kind comment on my poem Mother specially for sympathies for the loss of my mother at the tender age of 12. She was my guide, philosopher and friend. Today I am over 72 and feel that I didn't get enough time to enjoy her love and guidance. -Mohammad
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Date: 5/26/2011 10:19:00 AM
I am sitting here reading some very amazing poems today Joyce. I am glad yours was among them. Have a wonderful day full of love and joy. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/26/2011 10:16:00 AM
So many people are convicted on flimsy evidence. The new use of DNA evidence has seen many verdicts overturned and prisoners release. A sad poem, but this kind of thing happens too often, Joyce. Wishing you success in the contest, dear. Tomorrow night I leave for a fishing vacation and will be away for a week. Have a great time while I'm away. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/25/2011 8:51:00 PM
Ouch!! Poor, poor child. I'm glad you didn't note her age. Very good write, Joyce, from a master poetess.
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