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Loan Shark

Finkle Rat and Derby Cat Opened up a specialty shop Which was running rather smoothly Till kids teeth began to rot For what it was they sold were Candy apples, Sugar Cubes, and Lemon Drops With Fizzie Soda to make their quota On the loaner they had got You see the latest shipment of Fizzies Came from the loan shark Marco Mole To save themselves a buck or two Our naive friends both sold their souls And Marco doesn't care about Any kids or their rotten teeth Cause he also owns a piece of Charlie Cockroach The dentist down the street

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/26/2016 5:45:00 PM
Sounds like Marco the Mole was actually the Godfather; especially if he talked like he had cotton candy in his mouth! Very sweet poem Mike!:)
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Date: 11/26/2016 3:46:00 PM
ha ha ha great humour as ever Mike... I fancy a sherbet lemon sweet after reading your sweet treat of a poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Hauser
Date: 11/26/2016 3:53:00 PM
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