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Below is the poem entitled LLEDA'S THOUGHTS which was written by poet Adell Foster. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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LLeda's bronzed fingertips 
gently brushed the onyx wisps
of hair from her furrowed brow
times of yesteryear now
flirting with her thoughts;
mingled like grapevines, caught
between fantasy, and reality, remains
a lifetime of her dreams scattered 
as broken glass from a windowpane
Such childish games... Yet, unshattered
is her brain, and the heart which keeps her sane
Clearing the vines and glass
A beacon of light does flash
As LLeda's bronzed fingertips
gently brushed the onyx wisps 
of hair from her once furrowed brow

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  1. Date: 7/7/2010 7:16:00 PM
    lovely write, enjoyed...P.D.

  1. Date: 7/7/2010 12:24:00 PM
    Super flow to the great details found in your poem....the words held me captivated the entire way through~Chris

  1. Date: 7/7/2010 12:14:00 PM
    Wonderful imagery and flow to your words - enjoyed very much. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 7/7/2010 12:08:00 PM
    Great write...Excellent descriptiveness and expressiveness..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara