Lizard Dares

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The Lizard lays in the Sun It has no fear Its Island is deserted How will the Lizard survive? It tastes horrible. Predators know that from it’s bright colors Tasty treats are camouflaged Lizard dares the predators Bite Me! Not even a juvenile predator does The lizard flicks it’s tongue Scurries under a rock The teasing is done

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Daver Austin

Date: 5/4/2016 2:20:00 PM

There are those it pays to stay away from. Is it a hidden message? Congrats on the selection. daver

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/17/2014 3:56:00 PM

Very entertaining...how nice to feel so invulnerable...lol

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/10/2014 11:54:00 PM

Reminds me of the pet chameleon I had as a kid. Nice job! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Itsoghole O Solomon

Date: 10/2/2014 5:24:00 PM

The lizzard is assured of itself it can not be prey. A brief tale with a lesson. Good one Pavlick!

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/2/2014 2:01:00 PM

Kieran . . . One has to watch those lizards my friend. A very good write here. "The lizard flicks its tongue," says it all. They are indeed very quick and crafty creatures. Enjoyed your work very much. All the Best, Gary

Daver Austin

Date: 10/2/2014 10:03:00 AM

Them lizards remind me of some people I have known. They also have bad taste. Enjoyed this one, Kieren. Love, daver

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/2/2014 9:24:00 AM

wow dazzling picture vision in words very beautifully painted