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Living With Eyes Closed

She tempts me Silver words fly from a hazy mouth A shattered laugh rings through Shapeless promises Violent pleasures Waltzing through mazes Of cross-eyed moons. Face of ivory You regard me with your sharp tongued lies Seeking for something out of reach That only I can give you. Your words held me prisoner Steel chains wrapped around my legs Pulling me deeper into myself And I cannot tell you no. Your body of harmony wreaks so much havoc. Taunting me with a laugh of breaking glass. You let me hold the pieces together But you know they only cut. Blood pooling at my feet And glass shards in my palm. Hide the pain, close the fist. 1…Inhale 2…Exhale 3…Hesitate And smile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/29/2017 7:01:00 AM
This is very deep and a little dark.. I hope it is fiction.. I can see why it is your favourite poem..
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Iris Blade
Date: 10/29/2017 11:27:00 AM
Yes it is, but what's a day without a little night? Thank you for your comment Silent.
Date: 8/23/2017 11:50:00 PM
Absolutely wonderful Iris, you're such a wordsmith, your style, I like it, something you wrote to one of my poems too.
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Iris Blade
Date: 9/25/2017 3:46:00 PM
Oh thank you so much! Sorry I just saw your comment usually I try to reply right away, but thank you! I got inspiration from two different poems that sounded a lot better combined. Have a nice day!
Date: 8/17/2017 2:47:00 PM
- A great poem, Iris - Smile // Anne-Lise :)
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Iris Blade
Date: 8/17/2017 2:52:00 PM
Thank you so much!

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