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Living Waters

Curtain white cool bright Water drapes cascade delight Living waters fall Entered into Raul's contest, Rhythm of the Falls

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Date: 11/16/2009 6:07:00 PM

I've always wondered what it would be like to be under a waterfall. The sound would be awesome and I agree full of life. Good write Leon

Date: 11/16/2009 2:57:00 PM

Reminds me of my trip to Niagra Falls. Nice Peace Matthew Anish

Date: 10/15/2009 2:00:00 PM

Good luck in the contest. This Haiku is very descriptive. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara

Date: 10/13/2009 7:11:00 PM

I just now found your Haiku...It's so beautiful...Good luck in the contest...Marty

Date: 10/13/2009 10:08:00 AM

Wishing you the best in Raul's contest Leon. Love, Carol

Date: 10/13/2009 8:15:00 AM

Very beautiful..i think its a winner. Bg

Date: 10/12/2009 11:13:00 PM

Thanks for supporting my contest Leon...Raul

Date: 10/12/2009 3:16:00 PM

Quite a beautiful interpretation of the photo Raul posted, Leon! Much luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn