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Living the Moment

Under the bright sun; Between the trees here and there; Indulged my soul with the peace around. I rambled and rambled having a lot of fun; Happily moving my limbs along with the air; It refreshed my lungs as my nose flared. Freed up myself from the outside bounds; I threw all my despair and frights behind; Looking at everything so refined. I strode once I saw the flowing blue; It glamoured the spot with its mixed hue. It enlightened my spirit with its gliding sound; As it softly touched the shore ground. I was fully excited by the scene; When the flow egulfed the blue sky preen. Woo-hoo!! Such a breathtaking harmony; How It is created in such order and artfully.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2016 10:00:00 PM

Back again, Hanan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Hanan Essam
Date: 7/28/2016 5:21:00 AM

Hello Linda I don't how to call you but I think this is your name. Anyway I enjoyed reading your comments and your greetings. I would love you to follow my work and give me your constructive comments as this is what I am looking for. Also I would love to share with you my poetic skills; I gained it from a lot of readings; as well as I feel the suitable wordings that can go with the moment I am passing through, this is how I write my poems. Of coarse I would love to stop by to read your peoms and I will give you my opinion. Thank you for stopping by I hope you will find my future work as interesting as expected. Have a good day : )

Hanan Essam
Date: 7/28/2016 3:07:00 AM

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2016 4:51:00 PM

Woo-hoo, Hanan, enjoyed reading this first post. Enjoy your time here. Welcome aboard... Linda

Hanan Essam
Date: 7/27/2016 6:51:00 PM

I am happy that you enjoyed it. Thank you for your lovely greetings.

Hanan Essam
Date: 7/27/2016 5:54:00 PM

I am happy that you enjoyed it. Thank you for your lovely greetings.

Hanan Essam
Date: 7/27/2016 5:18:00 PM

I am happy that you enjoyed it. Thank you for your lovely greetings.

Skat A

Date: 7/27/2016 11:42:00 AM

Hanan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Hanan Essam
Date: 7/27/2016 11:47:00 AM

How are SKAT A I would love to have you as my first friend on poetry soup. I hope you enjoyed reading my poem. Allow me to enjoy yours as well. Best of luck for us all. :)