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Living Loveless

A breath escapes this lonely soul jilted sigh expels it heavily falling flat From on my back I see the stars align ...but only in other skies as charcoal cumulous and birds of prey loom in mine Each stab wound scars and scathes. they accumulate- Her indifference kills in it's lack of scorn or spite...just apathetic attacks Unprovoked and careless Inclinations to instigate strife ....to bring flavorful drama to her life... and misery to mine I helplessly fall into these traps seeking out affection in the dryest wells hitting bottom and licking the stone for it's scarcest moisture Parched and living loveless

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Date: 5/15/2010 9:04:00 PM
A sad Free verse. I hope you find what you're looking for.
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Date: 5/11/2010 9:58:00 PM
Steve.. I can relate to this! I too have fallen into such traps... but vow to never go through that again! Thanks for the reminder as re-enter the dating world :)
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Date: 5/11/2010 8:02:00 PM
How very sad to have to go through these kinds of pain. Don t let her win by becoming indifferent yourself. It's time to close the door to what cause you pain and find things, even little ones, that make life worthwhile, so that you can first realize you are worthwhile. The poem is very well written and conveys well your feelings. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 5/11/2010 8:52:00 AM
Enjoyed your heartfelt poem, keep sharing.
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Date: 5/11/2010 8:29:00 AM
learn how to switch places. be the one going away never to return. find the reasons and explain them to her. convince your self and she'll be back before you know it. and as always this is still the steve i know a poet to his heart. i love it. John Henry Loving III
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