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Living Life In Free Fall

Living life in free fall looking down far below praying that someone will come along to save my soul. Trying to walk on air grasping at the wind I fall faster and faster. Not knowing when I will hit the ground or who will mourn my demise and impending disaster. Peter Dome.copyright.2014. Jan. .

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Linda Jackson

Date: 1/6/2014 10:09:00 AM

I love this poem and can sense the free fall vividly. Brilliant. Best wishes, Linda x

Peter Dome
Date: 1/6/2014 11:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Linda. glad you enjoyed it. take good care. my best wishes. Pete.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/5/2014 6:34:00 PM

The last thing in this poem, I feel it too, but we must live for ourselves we will know nothing of who mourns us if any so why worry my friend [I'm talking to myself too!][ What a lovely thing to say to me :) I enjoy writing in Scots & Irish dialect, mostly no one reads it, they must take the time read it aloud, the brogue has such charm & I'm sure I don't 'ave it a' right yet!] Light & Love

Peter Dome
Date: 1/5/2014 7:01:00 PM

So true Debbie, but so sad too. I love your work and the brouge, I can't pretend Robbie's beautiful work and the likes are not always easy to understand., but I think you did. real justice with your excellent write. I also like the fact, you are keeping the dialect alive, and bringing it to a wide audience. to appreciate. such things are part of all of us. Thank you so much take good care. Pete.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/5/2014 3:56:00 PM

Well, I hope that there is no disaster but that someone greater than you catches before the landing..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Peter Dome
Date: 1/5/2014 4:31:00 PM

Hi Sara a real pleasure. your work is beautiful. thank you very much. I really appreciate hearing from you. take care best wishes. Pete.

Maggie Mae Mcafee

Date: 1/4/2014 11:01:00 PM

Very impelling! Maggie

Peter Dome
Date: 1/5/2014 7:24:00 AM

Hi Maggie so good to hear from you, thank you so much for your kindness and catching me before I hitting the ground ha ha. take care best wishes. Pete.