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Living In Your Dream

Floating across rivers, valleys, and streams I'm thinking of living inside of your dreams Run barefoot through nature, you chasing me End up tripping and falling in love by the sea We're two eagles that fly, soaring high in the sky Let the wind take our bodies, as life passes on by You're a delicate flower, I'm a young honey bee Sucking your nectar and starting a new family tree Sliding down rainbows after a warm springtime mist Laughter and giggles when on your cheek I plant my kiss Your dream will not end having me inside you Our days will get brighter and our night times will too

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Date: 5/20/2015 9:01:00 PM
A lovely romantic write that gives a taste of passion along with a taste of honey. ; -) ~Jan
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Date: 5/20/2015 6:56:00 AM
Whoa this is HOT! I love it! God Bless. D.
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Date: 5/16/2015 6:25:00 PM
You Tim know how to dream! Beautiful, fun and romantic! Hugs
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Date: 5/15/2015 7:22:00 PM
Wow! This poem makes me feel like falling in love!
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Date: 4/26/2015 11:32:00 AM
truly beautiful pen tim love the imaginary pal
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Date: 4/26/2015 8:27:00 AM
Oh you "old" dog, you! All the ladies' hearts must a-beatin' wildly!!!!
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Date: 4/25/2015 9:29:00 PM
Hello Tim, I see with your write here that you are still the "Master of Romance." I like this one for sure!! A "7" and a FAV definitely. (I have just started my very slow return to "PS" as I've been away since mid-February as I was finalizing my first book of poetry of publication. My book is now done and was released to the public on 9 April. I'm back now onboard once again with "PS" and look forward to more of your wonderful poetry as ever!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 4/25/2015 1:32:00 PM
- A lovely beautiful, colorful and romantic poem Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/25/2015 12:45:00 PM
Incredibly beautiful......7
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Date: 4/25/2015 12:17:00 PM
Ahhh!! Romantic work..Enjoyed reading your entrance into your dream lady's dream..Thanks for your visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:36:00 AM
lovely images Tim charming and romantic:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:39:00 AM
Thanks Jan have a great night....Tim
Date: 4/25/2015 11:12:00 AM
NICE! The Romantic Poet keeps on...lovely poem...and kind of sensual...A 7! PS. You may like to spellcheck the line before the last. :)
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:19:00 AM
Thanks Kim I fixed it.
Date: 4/25/2015 11:02:00 AM
Now I wanmt to slidw down rainbows and jump on candyfloss clouds.You re an exceptional poet Tim.Extremely Romantic.Another fav
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:20:00 AM
Yes that would be beautiful...maybe after the rain stops here I'll slide down one and get you....hugs Tim
Date: 4/25/2015 9:49:00 AM
a luscious dream this is, Tim. I loved the part about sliding down the rainbows. Very original image!
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:41:00 AM
Thanks Andrea...that would be most fun

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