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Living In the Gray

Sometimes I find myself living in the grays I stay there for days and days My world lacks contrast Shadows disappear I am somewhere that isn't here My land is encompased in a virtual haze A fog so thick it blocks out sun rays I search and grope for different ways I can't see forward or behind Complacency has blocked my mind No ambition I wonder why I lack the desire to try A finger tip and then a hand Caressesing my face removing the bland The light floods in I start to feel I can't get enough of this savory meal Now I wonder was it just a dream I start to move forward picking up steam Colors so bright Now I realize It was an internal veil that blocked my eyes Sometimes all it takes is someone's hand To escape from a world of gray and bland A kiss a smile Perhaps an embrace A gentle hand lightly placed Now the light and dark are clearly traced All my gray has been erased

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/14/2013 7:31:00 PM
Wow, this is deep, and love how it starts, love how it ends, really a refreshing inspiration that you share in my morning :D, I'm still working on my sestina, I'm about to make it into free verse :), wishing you a wonderful day Rick :D - hug, Yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2013 7:54:00 PM
Thanks Yanny, let me know when your poem is done. I hope your day is as wonderful as you are. It would then be a most wonderful day!
Date: 3/14/2013 12:14:00 AM
Sound like the deep blues. Wrote one similar about being color blind. Can't imagine the stigma of never knowing color.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2013 7:05:00 AM
Thanks Charles
Date: 3/13/2013 11:42:00 PM
Gray is really an unattractive color isn't it? The color that lacks any passion... it's just bleak. I am glad you know that person that can wash that all the way! Great flow and use of rhymes in this one!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2013 7:05:00 AM
Thanks Timothy
Date: 3/13/2013 10:55:00 PM
This is a great poem. I have many favorite poets, that have you as a favorite poet, and I see why. Thanks so much for your comment. I will, for sure, visiting your poems a little more, thanks so much again. I know i mentioned it, but I really like this poem. Whatever we can get from that speacial person, is like magic, it transforms us. Great work.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2013 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Wayland.
Date: 3/13/2013 6:09:00 PM
Beautiful Richard. So much truth in this for all of us.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2013 6:13:00 PM
thanks Donna, nice to see your smiling face.
Date: 3/13/2013 11:46:00 AM
Richard....this is amazing. I agree with Becca....you have a wonderful gift. I wrote something along the same lines entitled LOST...I haven't posted it...Perhaps I will sometime soon! Thanks for sharing...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2013 2:13:00 PM
I look forward to reading it, let me know when you post it.
Date: 3/13/2013 9:18:00 AM
ahhhh emerging from our own veils.. love this !!! Excellent !!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2013 2:14:00 PM
Thanks Debra
Date: 3/13/2013 9:00:00 AM
This poem is deep, translucent, and clear all at the same time. I think it's great!...and I Love that title!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2013 2:14:00 PM
Thanks Caleb

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