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Living In a Bubble

I’m living in a ‘bubble’ It’s protecting me from trouble The bubble has a skin The bad things can’t get in I’m surrounded by good friends I hope their friendship never ends They are keeping me afloat Please God don’t rock the boat They are keeping me quite sane I hope this state will remain Bad times lie ahead I know that in my head It is shielding me from harm My rainbow bubble has its charm It surrounds me with comfort and love It was sent from heaven above I need my bubble not to burst When my news is at its worst So please don’t find a pin And make those bad things pour right in Jan Allison 30th May 2014

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/3/2014 6:46:00 AM

2nd and 4th stanza are my favorites among this awesome write.... :) as I believe that God rocks our world however along this rocking He sends supports and lights as always as long as we lean on Him.. :) the fourth takes three attributes for me: faith, hope and endurance.. :) GBU and hugs JAn.. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/3/2014 7:16:00 AM

I feel so blessed to have had so much support from amazing friends here on soup. I can't believe how strong I feel and how my poetry is helping me through such a tough time in my life. Hugs as ever Olive. Jan xxxx

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/31/2014 11:26:00 PM

Beautiful write my friend!!!!! Big BBBRAVO!!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2014 2:19:00 AM

Thanks for the fabulous comment Robert. Hugs Jan xxx

Joe Murphy

Date: 5/31/2014 11:18:00 AM

Jan, keep finding the charm in your rainbow. Love the write. Stay well, God Speed. Joe

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2014 2:19:00 AM

Thanks Joe - its doing a mighty fine job at the moment :-) Thanks for dropping by Hugs Jan xxx

Jadazzle United

Date: 5/30/2014 9:48:00 PM

The protective bubble is indestructible , Thanks to the love of so many really good friends .

Jan Allison
Date: 5/31/2014 1:52:00 AM

Thanks Daz and you are the most special of the lot! Jadazzle rocks! hugs as ever my friend Jan xxxxx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/30/2014 2:12:00 PM

It is always nice to be sheltered from things that might harm us Jan...Thank God for good friends... Hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 5/30/2014 3:07:00 PM

I really do feel like it at the moment Tim - so much going on in my life but I feel protected somehow - just hope it continues:-) Hugs as ever my friend. Jan xxxx

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/30/2014 12:40:00 PM

Hi Jan, This was beautiful!! AMAZING!!! Simply amazing. Thanks so much for sharing this write with us here. Wonderful write my friend. Love and Peace, Deborah

Jan Allison
Date: 5/30/2014 1:00:00 PM

We mentioned 'Bubbles' in one of our mails and wham here is the poem. it really does sum up how i feel - just hope it never bursts. Hugs as ever Deborah you are a VERY special friend. Jan xxx

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 5/30/2014 12:08:00 PM

Only God can burst it, don't worry. It's His bubble, not rainbow, my dear :) Enjoyed. Love ya.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/30/2014 12:19:00 PM

Thanks Toquyen for our lovely comment. Hugs Jan xxx