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Living Among Dreams

..... As my eyes get too heavy, with the weight of each lid My dreams start to travel to where an alter me lives My head on my pillow, I am floating in clouds The sky is my ocean, where the waves sweep me out Like a sea washing up at the base of a cliff I feel ocean breezes, with the tides of ‘what-if ’… The places I visit, at the douse of the light Are dreams where I wander, in the thick of the night There is a path that meanders, that is woven with flowers Where the sun keeps on shining, no matter the hour I can lie in the sand, feel the warmth of the sun Tho’ the thunder clouds rattle my window like drums Often forgotten by morning, each place that I’ve been It is not easy by daylight...., to hold onto dreams
........ Inspired By Brian Strand's Contest: Your Pick/14 Lines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/27/2011 1:18:00 PM
Another masterpiece! I enjoy the easy rhythm.
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Date: 10/23/2011 11:08:00 AM
Wonderful write!!! Congratulations on your win!!-----Lori
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Date: 10/21/2011 3:37:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on another awesome win with this elegant poetry luv..
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Date: 10/21/2011 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie. Well written
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Date: 10/21/2011 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Your Pick" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2011 3:14:00 AM
Grace! Gorgeous dreams....Amazing! Love reading your poetry, Carrie. Gwendolen
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Date: 10/15/2011 2:56:00 AM
boy, such an awesome writer to be able to do such a superb sonnet in addition to your skill with free verse. I expect this to place very high. I entered a sonnet too (an oldie) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/14/2011 5:01:00 PM
I think your dreams are truly amazing! I wish to have dreams such as these! When I dream I remember not a thing about it when I awaken! Fabulous job Carrie!!
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