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Living All of It

Those carefree days of summer running in the fields with my woman. Will it ever happen or is it just a dream? If only money came easy, how soon I would have her released! She locked away in that cold prison and me longing every minute for her to be free and with me. How long has it been? Spring turned to summer and summer turned to fall and then winter. Spring came again followed by summer, and now fall. How weary and old I've grown waiting for my woman. Will there be another winter or another spring or summer or fall? I surely hope not! But let my love come to me soon, ere I die away, never to know the kisses from her sweet lips!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/4/2010 4:14:00 PM
Patience and longing that is very expressive in this write.Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my Imagism writes. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/26/2010 5:39:00 PM
You'd like "The Fields of Athenry", an Irish folk song. My woman waits for me, usually with a roller pin in her hand. Vince
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Date: 12/11/2009 11:10:00 AM
wow you came all the way from this. jhl
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Date: 10/18/2009 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/13/2009 4:00:00 PM
You did it my man! - Tim
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Date: 10/12/2009 1:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 10/12/2009 11:16:00 AM
Hi Marty Congrats on your feature write this week! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/12/2009 3:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Martin. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2009 8:43:00 PM
welcome to the soup! Martin!...nice poem!... jim
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Date: 9/16/2009 7:47:00 AM
Nicely done. Welcome to PS
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Date: 9/11/2009 6:18:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Martin. I wish you the best in your writng endeavors and in life. Love, Carol
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