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Live It To You

live it to you, where I had to i'm giving up you, and i have to to make you feel, it was worth it did i did wrong,when i had bad the last love,treat it as crush did you miss it,everlasting should it be this,change it for me i really want to,touch your body put my lips on,tell me when you ready we have done this,one last thing they will never, trust us sorry send your love too,where you have to live it to me.

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Date: 5/26/2016 10:38:00 PM
I think you got a typo on the last line. You meant...leave it to me
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Ankit Vaidya
Date: 5/27/2016 5:04:00 AM
Really appreciate you notice it, but its not type mistake, i was really trying to mess with people, using similar sounding words, I was trying to capture it as-i wannna be with you or living for you and you live for me, live it to you and live it to me. thanks a lot for your judgement, hope you like it :).
Date: 5/26/2016 6:12:00 PM
good poem, Ankit... skat
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Ankit Vaidya
Date: 5/27/2016 5:04:00 AM
thankyou skat :)

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