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Little Wren

Oh how the little wren sings Her chirpy tunes in day time Twittering morning for us A melodic charm of dawns chorus Quickly darting here and there Doesn't seem to have a care Collecting bedding for her nests Bits of moss and old string vest Oh how the little wren sings Her chirpy tunes in day time

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/2/2009 10:28:00 AM

Good day Anna-Marie. This is a lovely write, bright and cheerful. It creates a vivid scene, one can almost hear her chirping sounds. It's making me stop to listen to the birds outside.:) Wishing you the best..blessings to you and yours! Mikki

James Fraser

Date: 5/30/2009 3:13:00 AM

For a bird so small. Its stature is high, lovely poem Anna>James

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/28/2009 6:55:00 AM

This is such a sweet poem ... a ditty that children will sing ages to come ... it has immortality ... love it. Blessings and peace as your talent blooms and is shared to bring us joy.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/27/2009 10:36:00 AM

Thanks for the sweet comment! on Baby Shoes..i think...you have done couplet form above and very spritely! Light & Love

Corinne Curcio

Date: 5/27/2009 9:56:00 AM

What a lovely little poem - You captured the essence of a wren perfectly!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/27/2009 8:04:00 AM

Anna-Marie, Little wrens are so cheerful. You have captured the joy they bring to earth with your beautiful sweet poem. Keep writing, Lovingly, Dane

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/21/2009 7:06:00 AM

This brings a smile to my day!!! Nicely done!! ~ Carrie