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Little Victories

The city moves and laughs and sings Of lurid lights and fancy things Of static electricity And many opportunities The acid clouds are dismal gray Leave not a single trace of day Wind withers and regains its speed A buried, lonely poplar seed But while the city screams and clanks And people march in suited ranks A little light the clouds do show Wait now, the seed begins to grow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/3/2013 1:42:00 PM
I LOVE the contrast you show between man and nature, and that ending is truly awesome. I think it's time to add you to my favourite poets list!
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Date: 3/16/2013 11:14:00 PM
In the midst of all this chaos there's still countless signs of life... in big ways and small. I like the way you capture the great triumph of the seed growing in contrast to the millions of things that could go wrong. Awesome work!
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Date: 2/14/2013 9:02:00 PM
Great write, Jeremy! I especially like the line "and people march in suited ranks." Great rhyme and flow! Love, Kim
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/14/2013 9:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim

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