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Little Stars

As fireflies spark the sky, I think about my father. When I was young, and he was alive, we’d sit on the patio and watch fireflies fill the darkness. We talked well into the night, talks about little things that meant so much. Back then. Now, after a long day at work, I go back to a place where I pay room and board. I’m on my own, alone at nightfall as tiny lights flicker in front of me, and dance. I feel a sense of stillness, while shedding my years. For a moment, I’m a child again. stepping into void visions seen by eyes grown young little stars live on July 17, 2022 Like a Child Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/8/2022 12:17:00 PM
Beautiful... Good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/30/2022 4:00:00 PM
coming back to this one, I like it so much. My haibun also included these wonderful lantern carriers.
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Date: 7/23/2022 9:51:00 AM
What wonderful memories of your talks with your dad, watching fireflies. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/21/2022 1:12:00 PM
I love your take on the contest. Very sweet. Congratulations on your win David! ~Anaya
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Date: 7/21/2022 4:03:00 AM
"little stars live on" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/21/2022 2:36:00 AM
Love this! Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/17/2022 12:40:00 PM
So sweet!
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Date: 7/17/2022 11:58:00 AM
probably one of the best ones i have seen if for that one contest. I sure miss Iowa fireflies. they don't exist in Utah
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Date: 7/17/2022 1:08:00 AM
Very beautiful Haibun. Loved it.
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