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Little Red Car 2015

LITTLE RED CAR 2015 Looking out to the sea where the sky cuts in two; Palm Beach seagulls are drifting on currents like they do; I can feel what they're riding, it's a soft summer eve, and I hear every sigh; as they whisper sighs I believe. There's a girl on the beach, she has eyes deep and blue, in her smile is a fantasy; reminds me of you; but she's been too long sitting in the sun, by the sea, and the boy she hopes to meet, reminds me of me. If I think long ago, to a love I once knew, she might be part of everything, maybe even you. But she folds her umbrella, then she tosses her hair, and she smiles "I have to go, but I don't remember where." As she walks from the beach, I can still feel the blue of her eyes touching me , and reminding me of you. As I think where you've been, and I wonder where you are, I watch her drive away in her little red car. It's that same little car just as firecracker red when I penned every word as you drove through my head. © Vee Bdosa the Doylestown Poet

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Date: 1/30/2016 5:51:00 PM
VEE, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Always & Forever! LINDA
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:54:00 AM
What an amazing work you've done Vee! This deserves a thousand views!
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Date: 1/25/2016 10:33:00 AM
Congratulation on Lil Red Car being featured on Poetry Soup. It is indeed clever and says a lot....about life...Loved It
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