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Little People Ii

LITTLE PEOPLE II if you look closely at the forest of deep green for a few seconds you might see little glints tiny eyes between the leaves they live to chatter high-pitched voices barely sound when mixed with the breeze and this all for the good oh what malicious cursing! some think they are cute these miniature woodsmen but like smallest folk they are petty quarrelsome and hate everything big

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/5/2012 6:40:00 PM
Well Daver, I didn't know I could be a stubborn nimwit and still give you comments.:)) Second last line makes me think of myself.:( Do I win an axe now?:) Thank you for always being there, Daver, and thank you for all the smiles you give. I'm lucky to know you!! Love, Mikki
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Date: 7/2/2012 8:30:00 PM
great imagery Daver.. and we have lots here in NJ and down the seashore too luv.. hope u are doing well.. your lines refresh me to write again luv..
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Date: 7/2/2012 9:12:00 AM
Daver, this is adorable. I love it!! sorry I can't take more time to see if you have more poems. Hopefully I will be able to spend more time here after tomorrow. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/1/2012 12:06:00 PM
Soup mail Daver!!
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Date: 7/1/2012 11:13:00 AM
Daver, I like this story of the little folk, and of course they exist!...David
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Date: 7/1/2012 10:59:00 AM
Good Morning Daver, i knew i was not alone in this world.. LOL... scary can be big, especially to the little people. Thank you for sharing your little story.. always PD
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Date: 7/1/2012 10:39:00 AM
Cute lil' write here Dave ! Enjoyed it much, as your first ! Have a wonderful Sunday dear poet....much love, james
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