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Little Leaf On My Floor

Little leaf on my floor, from whence did you come? From the upper boughs, or lower tombs? From whence did they exhume from low gales trembling, your little monumental life? Much is yours as is mine, little life you are, threshing in the wind.... I am big, you are small (though monumental in my eyes) I do hope you came from the upper boughs, from whence there be many a friend to shield thee from the wind... little leaf on my floor ((MONUMENT)( to a little leaf)) The branches snap.... in the rain and snow, the breath of days far gone has teased the tense, creaking boughs shifting back and forth to and fro; The weary grasp, the life thus clung ---- time for worn-weathered days now, the bones knock (and stems bend) time and again, to flutter in the wind fain... loyal to life to bitter end; Until the snap and crash comes, (and the end of days) never immortal, like the wind.... Keith Hunt (c) 2013

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Date: 5/28/2014 9:35:00 PM
Thanks for opening my eyes to every leaf upon the ground! Lovely write~Catfish
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Date: 5/13/2014 11:27:00 AM
So wide and vast your mind travels to be able to write so fondly about the leaf..Lovely!!
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Date: 5/12/2014 10:22:00 PM
Nature can be so inspiring as you show clearly in this work. There is an O.Henry story called the Last Leaf which you might want to read. Peace &Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/11/2014 2:23:00 PM
Dear Keith, I have become a big fan of your writing. Love the way you show compassion for the leaf in the first half. In the second half of the poem, I see the leaf as a metaphor for human life. None of us are immortal and we don't know when that "snap and crash" will come. Your style reminds me of a student I once had. I entered one of his poems in a statewide challenge and he placed third, winning a nice trophy. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Your fan, Carolyn
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 5/12/2014 11:32:00 AM
Thanks Carolyn, seems a major compliment considering the comparison to this brilliant student --- I hope they keep writing, not easy to excel as they in a statewide contest. :-) I shall write for thee, faithfully, Keith
Date: 5/11/2014 10:19:00 AM
A truly awe inspiring write. Just to see such in a leaf shows great insight into God's creation and its beauty! Double bravo!!
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Date: 5/6/2014 2:55:00 PM
Hi Keith, Monumental and exquisite write~ VERY GOOD:~) Thanks for sharing this with us here. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/6/2014 12:50:00 PM
descriptive piece,filled with interesting imagery on atue...I enjoyed reading it,keith!.. huggs
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Date: 5/6/2014 12:40:00 PM
great write Keith,,lover of nature
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Date: 5/5/2014 8:58:00 PM
Astounding, simply astounding!
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Date: 5/5/2014 5:42:00 PM
wowoowwoow what a great imagination you have and what a little leaf on the floor can give a challenging and touchy reflection and that you as the author made it all the more a wow..!!! thanks much for the share Keith.. :) , God bless and always.. :)
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 5/5/2014 8:05:00 PM
Thanks Olive, it was quite a challenging write, yet very enjoyable! God Bless! :-)

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