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Little Lad and Big Dog

In the woods amidst the fog Were a little lad and his big dog Lost they were with direction at odds The little lad pawed and trudged through the sod With no end in sight to the little lad's fright Little lad panicked he'd be here all night So the little lad bawled and endlessly called But no one answered his piteous squalls Not a soul was 'round to hear such a sound So the little lad crawled and tried to recall Which way they came in on this so-called Adventurous walk of little lad and big dog And then little lad saw with loads of awe That mommy had found them with help of the law He thought she would scold and prepared to be told Of all the punishments his future would hold But mommy rushed to him, her joy uncontrolled She kissed his face, her fears untold And out of the woods amidst the fog Mommy took home little lad and big dog

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Date: 7/12/2013 9:44:00 PM
APRIL, ~CONGRATULATIONS~ a fine winning poem in the "Little Lad and big Dog" contest by: Seren.... entertaining work... LINDA
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Date: 7/10/2013 4:53:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win, April! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/9/2013 12:29:00 AM
April..!! Congratulations on your win..! ;) *Hug ~ Shirley
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Date: 7/7/2013 7:55:00 PM
Congrats and thank you for your entry ...Seren
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Date: 7/7/2013 8:10:00 PM
OMG YAYAYAYAY! Thanks so much!! :D :D:D:D
Date: 6/30/2013 6:45:00 PM
Your poem is very good, have a look at the rhyme scheme. I rewrote my poem because I had written couplets. Shoud be abab cdcd efef ghgh. Click on the form tab above your title to see an example and explanation of the form. Wether you rewrite it or not, it is a very good poem and I enjoyed reading it. I kept my original one and just wrote another instead.
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Date: 6/28/2013 7:52:00 AM
This poem is so sweet with such a perfect ending. Well done
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Date: 6/27/2013 11:19:00 PM
Very nicely written with great descriptiveness and rhyming.
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:38:00 PM
I like the flow of this gl in contest Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/27/2013 6:58:00 PM
Sweet, April! Great story! Your last stanza remarkable! Jimbo
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Date: 6/27/2013 6:03:00 PM
April this is excellent tale in rhyme. The dialogue read smoothly with meter. It should place well in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
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