Little Hummer

. The little hummer Flits amongst the daylilies Observed by the cat

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 6/27/2010 12:00:00 AM

lol.hummers are like boxes. ~Always&Forever

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/21/2010 10:21:00 AM

Sweet haiku, Sara. Soup mail for you. Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/21/2010 1:59:00 AM

cool cat, a little hummer this is, love it harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2010 10:37:00 PM

Hmm, i take it this is not a vehicle! This is really CUTE. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 6/20/2010 6:09:00 PM

Yes,Haaaaa! all too vivid, Sara. My manx cat lies out on the trampoline and watches the hummers, ratcoons and squirrels feed on the seeds that I put out for them. agape, Moses

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/20/2010 2:44:00 PM

sounds like a picture

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/20/2010 2:41:00 PM

Cute picture, i like the observation. Hope the cat does not get to the hummer, have nice father days,..p.d.

Derrick Burton

Date: 6/20/2010 12:50:00 PM

wow short and beautiful poetry here. Enjoy your Sunday and will also check out a few of your other ones. :) Enjoy your Sunday.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/20/2010 11:06:00 AM

Nice Haiku, Sara, enjoyed reading it this Sunday afternoon! The workers can't get caffeine in their bodies as they are picking the cherries, i.e. the fruit which contains the coffee beans. Coffee leaves contain also few caffeine and the caffeine concentration of the seeds, the coffee beans is only between 1 and 1,5%. No harm for the workers! It is different with tobacco leaves as they contain nicotine which is easily absorbed through the skin when picking the leaves.....Gert

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/20/2010 8:53:00 AM

A perfect haiku with great images