Get Your Premium Membership

Little Haley Died Today

Haley gave up the ghost today, all we could do was cry and pray. She'd suffered so long, her whole life, disease had wracked her body with strife. Cystic Fibrosis did her in, choked her lungs and kept her thin, poor little child, we knew her well, spending so much time in hospital hell. She barely made twenty-one, and now her short life's said and done. We cried for her mother, in such grief, but to Haley, by God, death was a relief. ©Danielle White

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/12/2009 10:37:00 AM
A more sensitive write i have yet to read, made me cry and my heart to bleed, my thoughts are circling your soul Haley>James
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2009 6:45:00 AM
Breath taking, written with such intensity, you did her proud with such a beautiful tribute.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/11/2009 9:19:00 PM
So sad and yet so beautifully written..My heart goes out to all those that loved her and will miss her dearly, she will be with you always, and now she is resting in heaven with our father Jesus Christ. She is no longer suffering, but to all those left behind, I pray God brings comfort to your souls..Beautiful tribute..God Bless You And Keep*Tyesha
Login to Reply
Date: 2/11/2009 9:05:00 PM
Beautiful, what else can be said! Blessings, Ron
Login to Reply
Date: 2/11/2009 1:55:00 PM
This is such a nice tribute to one who suffered so. I hope you let her mom read it. So sorry for you and those who loved her. BG
Login to Reply
Date: 2/11/2009 1:30:00 PM
Wow...no words, Danielle. To all touched by her life, my prayers.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/11/2009 12:28:00 PM
So sorry for your loss, and for her poor mother who no doubt will miss her so. Wishing everyone healing and peace. Love, Shar
Login to Reply
Date: 2/11/2009 11:50:00 AM
This is a very sad read my friend. I don't think I have words to really express. God bless.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/11/2009 11:34:00 AM
This is so sad, may God bring you, and loved ones comfort. always, Christy
Login to Reply
Date: 2/11/2009 11:16:00 AM
While the poem itself is terrific, the subject is a sad one and had me tearing. My heart goes out to you and the family. Michael
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs