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Little Girl Rising

The lonliness of being this girl Her Innocense taken away She hides herself and her eyes Finds comfort in being shy Frightened of what she may see Knowing she will give away The secrets she holds deep Isolated by what she keeps Scared to let it be released Afraid of being alone to fight The worst of all is the night Powerless - exposed Unable to hide - Terrified Prying eyes hunting her down Piercing straight through Frozen like a statue - concrete She shuts down - emotionless Only strength can take her there Keep her from feeling Taking her to another space An escape - to another place Forced to grow up before her time Face the fear and take the strength inside She stands alone this time to fight Secrets revealed - preditor exposed She is just a girl finding her way Taking her stand fighting for her life Reclaiming her innocense to be a girl An experience that opened her eyes To the person she is inside The inner strength that she finds Keeping her safe from preditors disguise This is the story of one little girls rise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/23/2013 4:48:00 PM
Congratulations on this very well written poem. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 8/6/2013 5:16:00 PM
Tremendous job....congratulations....
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:53:00 AM
Shaz, Congratulations!!! ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:07:00 AM
Hi Shaz, heartfelt poem... Congratulations in Richard's "Girl Rising." contest.... always *LINDA
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Date: 8/5/2013 7:56:00 AM
Very moving, thanks so much for entering my contest.
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Date: 7/23/2013 11:25:00 PM
So much emotion in this write. I feel pain and fear, the need for inner strength. Very heartfelt write dear Shaz Hugs.. :o)
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Date: 7/21/2013 5:19:00 AM
Wow, awesome write!! I sincerely hope this is a work of fiction, Shaz. I'm assuming this is for Richard's contest. The very best of luck to you with this deep write. :)
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Date: 7/19/2013 10:56:00 AM
DEEP!! Your wording is incredible!! Truly, truly incredible!...Milt
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Date: 7/19/2013 7:59:00 AM
An emotional & heart-wrenching powerhouse of lines. Respect to you for this piece!
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Date: 7/19/2013 5:49:00 AM
A very powerful write, my dear Shaz! Emotionally described and superbly presented! Huggs, Jack xox
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