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Little Coffee House

Little Coffee House It’s the coffee counter line-up A conveyor belt of people Ready for their little treat A little piece of comfort From their favorite beanery I strum as I watch them My guitar like an old friend They should say hello to - But they never do Little Coffee House My band’s playing for you But what do you do You just want want want your cups Your little coffee mugs So move up to the front Funky-spiked hair dude Jokes with the worker He leans on the counter (I think that he likes her) But people are waiting And he’s hesitating So all the shoe tappers Start to harass him - Hurry up and pick one fast Little Coffee House We’re playing for you But what do you do You just need need need your cups Your little coffee mugs And that little coffee buzz I look around the room There’s a girl in a red shirt Looking out of the window She sips on a latte - I think she’s an artist She lays out her sketchbook But she doesn’t start to draw She turns to face the wall – What are we doing wrong? We don’t have to be inspiration But how ‘bout entertainment? Are we a distraction? I can’t help but asking Are we an invasion Of the air? Little Coffee House We’re playing for you But what do you do You just sip sip sip your cups Your little coffee mugs Not listening to us There’s a man on a laptop There’s a girl reading Sherlock There’s a guy on a cell phone A boy eating Jell-O I want them to look up If they’d look up they’d see us Are we so bad we should shut up? Because I feel like we just suck - I feel like we’re not even here We’re jamming To inattentive ears Oh Little Coffee House I feel I’m at a loss We’re playing here for you But what do you do Your busy coffee mouths Keep sippin’ till it’s out If only you’d listen You’d hear what you’re missin’ We’re not Just another gig Someday, we’ll make it BIG Sip sip sippin’ cups Those little coffee mugs Sip ‘em till they’re out Little Coffee House

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/1/2013 7:55:00 AM
This is a creative, unique, different, entertaining and imaginative write. You pull the reader in and take them on a journey into the coffee house and singer world. Nice job
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Date: 7/9/2012 12:53:00 PM
Goodness gracious, Susan! This poem is HOT! Smokin' hot and I am in awe that it didn't place...well, it is one dynamo of a write and the ambiance u captured as u received your coffee has never been penned so well! Savin it for me treasure trove of poetry....it's really hard draggin such heavy poems with one wooden leg....Rrrrr! .....A special thanks for enjoying my poem of my childhood memories...left out the box of doll parts...legs, arms,,,,doll clothes and eyeballs at the bottom of the box too...hahah....luv'd the contest a lot! Thanks again, gwendolen
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Date: 6/28/2012 7:22:00 PM
I can see Rhonda's point. It certainly is very original, Susan. I think you told me you wrote it as a song. Wouldn't it be nice to put it to music?
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Date: 6/27/2012 9:21:00 PM
I cannot believe your poem didn't place! It's a top finisher on my list. Such a fantastic and memorable write!! To each his or her own, I guess. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 6/27/2012 9:52:00 AM
Love this thought provoking piece, Susan - it must be frustrating for entertainers in those places. Are you really in a band?
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Date: 6/28/2012 8:38:00 AM
No, but I wish I could sing...
Date: 6/27/2012 9:05:00 AM
I can't choose which is better, the smell or the taste. One is free and the other keeps going up. One day I may need to make a choice. Loved the message Susan
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Date: 6/26/2012 9:51:00 AM
This sure was a very enjoyable read for me Susan! And I liked the refrain that you used! What I liked even more was of how this came across to me as a "people watching" poem-- I love to people watch! I wish you the best in the contest...And thanks for passing by my poem :) -- as for your question-- I leave the interpretation up to you :) see it as you deem fit please. Thanks!
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Date: 6/26/2012 8:44:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry with us today Susan. I am enjoying reading our new poets plus our seasoned poets. Have a beautiful day and may you continue to find the inspiration to write for years to come. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2012 9:23:00 PM
Gosh, sounds like a SONG. What made you decide to do song lyrics, Susan. this is great stuff for Nate's contest. I think the most creative entry that I have seen!
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Date: 6/25/2012 7:54:00 PM
I just read an astounding masterpiece! I wish I could a create a poem as wonderful as this. Expect to be on the winners' circle! Congrats in advance!
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Date: 6/25/2012 4:20:00 PM
I love this poem... it's so good! It's probably... you'll never believe this... one of my favorites!Once again, I want you to know that this poem is incredible... you should really think about getting it published. I know a great website that publishes poetry in a book and you can win prizes. (It's a contest.) You could easily win; this poem is dynamite! Visit poeticpossibilities.tk and you'll find it under the tab: "Monthly Contest." You really should enter it... it is a truly outstanding poem.
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Date: 6/25/2012 3:01:00 PM
its so aggrevating..grrr..sometimes you can take the bull by the horns I've gotten up and said HEY!!!! PLEASE listen these folks worked hard on this to show YOU [poem, song etc.] It usually works i schock them into listening BIG HUGS Light & Love
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Date: 6/25/2012 2:13:00 PM
Wish I was there....just sip sip my cup....very well written B.E.Susan. - Wish you luck in contest - hope you win !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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