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Voice: Sara Ella Little bright stardrops in emerald green Emerald green forest in starlight so bright Starlight so bright as you've never seen You've never seen so much peace in the night Night with a moonbeam that brightens my mood Brightens my mood with small kisses of gold Kisses of gold that gives feelings so good Feelings so good they drive out the cold Cold that crept up my mute spine in the eve In the eve where the demons were waiting for me Waiting for me with their smirks, I believe I believe I can wish them away, you will see You will see little stardrops in starlight so bright So bright as the night without clouds without fear Without fear I conquer my demons this night This night is the first night without any tear *** January 7, 2017

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Date: 1/8/2017 6:15:00 PM
Darren, I love the pattern you created playing off the endings of each line. Great styled poem!
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Darren White
Date: 1/8/2017 11:44:00 PM
Yes, it's something that sat in the back of my mind for quite a while. It has a sort of cadence to it that I love.... like a see saw :)
Date: 1/7/2017 8:19:00 PM
This is amazing, Darren, I'm keeping this one in my favourites mate! /|\
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Darren White
Date: 1/7/2017 11:13:00 PM
I love that Budgie, thank you :)
Date: 1/7/2017 6:26:00 PM
incredible, darren... this is gold and it reminds me of a contest i did before with a form similar to this which i called' wreath.."... wow!..hugggs
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Darren White
Date: 1/7/2017 11:12:00 PM
I think I remember that one? Wasn't too long ago, was it, Nette?
Date: 1/7/2017 3:56:00 PM
This is absolutely brilliant and i love it! Can't stop reading it over and over. <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/7/2017 11:12:00 PM
Good Claudia, keep on reading ;)
Date: 1/7/2017 2:31:00 PM
Good one Darren :)
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Darren White
Date: 1/7/2017 11:11:00 PM
Thanks Heidi :)
Date: 1/7/2017 1:53:00 PM
This flows so fluidly it is magic for the tongue. Brilliant like stars if you pardon the pun.
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Darren White
Date: 1/7/2017 1:56:00 PM
I pardon the pun :) Thank you, and yes that was exactly my intention, that it rolls of the tongue with ease.

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