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Little Boy

There once was a boy he was filled with great joy He liked to play with toys then he got hit in the groin It hurt so bad he cried to his dad But he said shut up boy i'm playing with my toy He went to mom then she was bombed Then he died really bad on the inside He had a child who was wild It wanted to fly and fell very high then they all died THE END

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/22/2016 11:33:00 PM
Jim WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/22/2016 11:20:00 AM
Jim, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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