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Little Beaver

A little beaver Possessed to harvest timber The teeth razor-sharp Does he think about his toil His hut, design or instinct Edward J Ebbs - March 8, 2015

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Constance La France

Date: 8/22/2015 1:47:00 PM

Ed, I love your beaver tanka, I recall watching a documentary on beavers, they are amazing creatures A7 and thanks for visiting my maple tree poem, I hate seeing old trees cut down

Edward Ebbs
Date: 8/23/2015 10:18:00 AM

The beavers have moved on for now...A mall was built around here years ago. There was this huge Oak tree on the property and because of the outcry from the community, the owners and developers incorporated the tree into their project...you need happy customers after-all :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/7/2015 6:45:00 PM

lovely image springs to mind Ed of busy eager beavers great pen hugs 7

Edward Ebbs
Date: 5/8/2015 2:10:00 PM

Like the story of the tourtose and haire, the beavers work slow and deliberate :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/24/2015 8:17:00 AM

God made the beaver, to fend for himself and without them, would we have learned to build our own shelters? We learn by observation...beaver's diligence is a gift; he teaches us that our natural resources, are also a gift. I do love this poem.

Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/24/2015 7:27:00 PM

We learn from each other, wonder who is learning from us :) Thank You :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/15/2015 12:50:00 PM

Hi Ed, your poem made me think. Perhaps the beaver is just building dams because it is in his instinctive nature. I doubt they take measurements, pull permits or worry about the quality of the wood when they "harvest timber." Very poignant! 7 fromme. Best wishes, Carolyn

Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/15/2015 8:43:00 PM

You could be right, no one is going to build a home for them, but they can be a little selective on what they harvest if they have a choice...kind of like us in a way :) Thank You

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/13/2015 8:57:00 AM

Instinct or not, I just think we should figure out how to bottle that energy. :)

Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/14/2015 3:53:00 PM

Robert...I agree :)

Constance La France

Date: 3/12/2015 8:58:00 AM

ED, a thought provoking write, the beaver, and we have tons here in Canada, can be both beautiful and destructive in his pursuit for that timber, loved your tanka verse, well done and thanks for your thoughtful comment on my poem, in the garden . . .

Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/12/2015 8:31:00 PM

Oregon has a lot of them too...

Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/12/2015 8:08:00 PM

Thank You Broken Wings :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2015 8:19:00 AM

He just goes about his duty doing what he was designed to do..Interesting work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Edward Ebbs
Date: 3/10/2015 10:04:00 PM

Thank You Sara :)