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Litany of Bees

Buzz, buzz, buzzing our work is never done; gathering the nectar kissed by the sun. Buzz, buzz, buzzing a familiar tune; We sing in harmony, throughout the afternoon. Buzz, buzz, buzzing in a magical ballet; Our pockets filled with beads of gold, then we fly away. May 28, 2022 For: Bee Creative Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Matt Caliri Rhymes validated on Rhymezone.com

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Jennifer Fenn

Date: 6/26/2022 1:36:00 PM

This poem is really cute, and it made me smile. Even though I am allergic to bee stings, I can’t help but like bees themselves.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/27/2022 11:41:00 AM

Oh dear, not good to be allergic to bee stings....but glad you still appreciate the magical moments they bring. Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/2/2022 8:33:00 PM

Creative and cuter than cute. Love it! Great write, Paulette! ~ gw

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/3/2022 12:16:00 PM

Love those little creatures, they keep my garden alive! :)Paulette

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/1/2022 3:36:00 PM

A little treat you give us here Paulette, pockets filled with beads of gold then flying away, who’d of imagined such lines, Fantastic piece of bee personification, cheers David

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/2/2022 3:21:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it! Love those little bees! Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/29/2022 6:00:00 PM

So creative and descriptive--delightful, Paulette! Janice

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/30/2022 5:23:00 AM

Janice, glad you enjoyed it. I enjoy the delightful visit of bees to my garden; what better way than to pay tribute to them then a poem! :)Paulette

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/29/2022 1:23:00 PM

Paulette, you have written some very beautiful couplets. Your poem has a natural smooth flow. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, my friend.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/30/2022 5:21:00 AM

Lasaad, you always are so generous with your comments...Thank you, thank you, thank you. :)Paulette

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/29/2022 9:58:00 AM

Dear Paulette, what a charming sound of buzzing! You are so creative! Your visit to my page is delightful. Love ~ Mala

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/30/2022 5:21:00 AM

Thank you Mala~glad you enjoyed it~imagery tells a wonderful story, doesn't it? have a blessed day, my friend. :)Paulette

Valsa George

Date: 5/29/2022 9:36:00 AM

This is indeed sweet like the pollen they gather ! The buzzing sound adds to the rhythmic effect of the poem, Paulette !

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/30/2022 5:20:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it~Bees are such marvelous creatures, we cant live without them. :)Paulette

Bill Baker

Date: 5/28/2022 11:35:00 PM

Nice rhythmic couplets, Paulette. The poem flowed smoothly. Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/29/2022 4:26:00 AM

Lots of fun to watch busy bees at work~Thanks for stopping by. :)Paulette