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calm moonlit river one arrow in her quiver… wind brings a shiver

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/28/2011 3:47:00 PM
you know what? if you simply said "wind shivers" in that last line, you could submit this into the 15 syllable haiku contest! It would sure be high on MY list if I were a judge.
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Date: 1/28/2011 3:46:00 PM
oh,my,this really gets the imagination going!! Love this one.
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Date: 1/28/2011 11:41:00 AM
one arrow in her quiver well done, what a way to deliver
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