Listless

LISTLESS Sitting at my faithful desk Listless Lifeless work sits incomplete Listless Watching icy raindrops fall Listless View outside affirming gloom Listless Perchance another poem to pen... “LISTLESS”

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Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 8/5/2013 8:32:00 AM

owesome.. Can i be listfull in the poem then.. I love the theme Breda...... Nice meeting you...

Gerald Kithinji

Date: 8/1/2013 9:40:00 AM

Oh, Capt Jack, the ship is listing. Thank you Kim for reminding me how languid I have been feeling in the hour or so. Time for a cuppa!

Sean L Sanders

Date: 7/28/2013 3:28:00 PM

strinking poem Nicely done and said

Ken Carroll

Date: 7/28/2013 12:13:00 PM

I've had those kind of days...Good write..Ken

Richard Ferry

Date: 7/19/2013 2:39:00 PM

excellent

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2013 1:33:00 AM

this is GREAT. From the day making you listless down to the penning of Listless!!

Skat A

Date: 7/18/2013 11:30:00 PM

you are a beautiful poetess.... SKAT

Jack Jordan

Date: 7/18/2013 5:02:00 PM

Ooohh mmyyyy, I do know about this, especially on those dark, cold days. Simple, elegant poetry, a lot said in few words... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/18/2013 2:17:00 PM

- Here it is : rain, fog, rain, fog, rain, fog, rain ........ yes, I understand you well!! - Where is summer ??????? - Well written my friend Kim! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/18/2013 9:44:00 AM

Turn the raindrops into sunshine. It's not easy, but we are the weather makers of our heart. Smile like the sun today...wonderful and moody piece!