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Listening to the wind whisper her name as cerulean waves cascade to shore; love sparks passion's all-consuming flame. Cupid's arrow boasts an uncanny aim, striking my heart at its romantic core; listening to the wind whisper her name. Seeking no answers nor assigning blame as trust cuts keys that unlock every door; love sparks passion's all-consuming flame. Primordial urges run wild to tame summoning feelings, I wish to explore; listening to the wind whisper her name. Naked and yet oblivious to shame, happier than I've ever been before; love sparks passion's all-consuming flame. Completely different, and yet the same, I'm in love with an angel I adore. Listening to the wind whisper her name, love sparks passion's all-consuming flame.

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Date: 2/27/2018 11:36:00 AM
"Listening to the wind whisper her name" is a lovely line to repeat for most impactful imagery. The second stanza is my favourite. Awesome poem, Emile.
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Date: 9/21/2016 11:48:00 AM
The villanelle form is absolutely perfect for this beautiful romantic poem Emile:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/22/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your doping by with a sweet comment. Emile.
Date: 9/7/2016 8:26:00 PM
Lovely, Emile, and it works so well in Villanelle. regards, Viv
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Date: 9/7/2016 8:41:00 PM
Thanks Viv, your comments are always most welcome. Emile.
Date: 9/5/2016 10:21:00 PM
How beautiful and expertly done in designated form. Maybe a dedication to someone? Way too lovely not to be ... CayCay
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Date: 9/6/2016 8:32:00 AM
Thanks CayCay, your comments are like a ray of sunshine on a cloudy day. Emile.
Date: 9/5/2016 5:16:00 PM
Very sweet poem. I loved listening to the wind whisper
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Date: 9/5/2016 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Tim, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend. Emile.

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